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T-t-t-t-tell me,
That you are,
Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry.
Again and Again,
You throw my Love In The Ice.
It is Unforgettable.
Love After Love,
You develop a Dangerous Mind.
All I want you to do is to
Free Your Mind.
Because Your Love Is All I Need.

Tonight I want to be with U.
So Show Me Your Love.
This will become an Endless Moment.

Well...Let's Go On A Trip!
To watch the Rising, Red Sun.
And the beautiful Purple Line.
This feels like Paradise,
Hi Ya Ya~
What a Lovely Day.

You know your Hug gives me warmth,
To let me survive like a Survivor.
I want to Talk to you, Play with you, and Love you.
And let you steal my Heart, Mind, & Soul.

I am Proud of our love.
Lovin' You is part of my Happiness.
It feels like a Summer Dream.
So to fulfill my Wish,
Let's end this Secret Game.

- © cherliar ♥
This is for "Poem In The Pocket Day" tomorrow. (:
I took one out from the internet and I didn't like it...
I mean I liked it, but I wanted to be original.
I saw that my friends wrote their own poems, so I wanted to do the same. ^^

Anyways...I decided to use song names to make my poem. XD
Hopefully, the school staff & students wouldn't be like, "HUH? WTH IS THIS?"

*sigh*
Comments/Opinions are appreciated. ;D
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Melloloveschocolate Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Student General Artist
The question here is, "Why isn't there 1,033 favorites for this?!!!" :O

:love::+fav:
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SaranghaeUnni Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
Yay <3 lol loved the beginning ;)
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
thanks. ^__^ <3
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fr-esh Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Student
you. are. a. legend.
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
LOL ! thanks...? ;D
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runswithmonkies Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
so cute. :D

KPOP FTW. ;D
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
Aw thanks. <3
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BlackRose1377 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
Hahaha.
I liked it.
I loved the fact that you used song names for it.
I never would have thought of thath.
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
Thanks! :aww: <33333
I'm glad you liked it.
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BlackRose1377 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
XD ;P
You're welcome.
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Song-of-Simplicity Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
This is so awesome, very creative idea!! :meow: How'd it go over with your class and teacher?
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
Hehe, thank you. :hug:
No one asked me to read it except like a few of my friends. -_-;
But in Language Arts (English) class, my teacher asked us to share, but I was too shy. :c :blush:
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Song-of-Simplicity Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
You're welcome! :D

I bet your friends liked it :) I also bet that your teacher and class would have liked it too!! I definitely know the feeling of being too shy to share aka story of my highschool career ;P
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
Hahaha chyeas. ^__^
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Song-of-Simplicity Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
Haha ^w^v
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Hinata--Hime Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
OMG- I just about spazzed. And then I was like- OMG. SORRY SORRY. This is made of win.
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
Hehe, thank you! ^__^

:iconbigheartplz:
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Hinata--Hime Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
It's very cute.
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:iconiheartsuju13:
iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
I'm glad. :aww:
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animeangel101344 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Thats so creative!! I bet everyone in your class will think it's awsome, coz it is!! xD :heart:
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
Hahaha, thank you! ^__^
Too bad they're not as interested in K-Pop as I am. D:

:iconbigheartplz:
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animeangel101344 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
lmao, no problem! XD

Awww...thats too bad.. D:

*spreads K-pop fairy dust on them...* XDDDD

Hopefully they'll like it.. :3
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
Hahaha! XD :heart:

Yea...hopefully they'll like it. (x
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animeangel101344 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
: D
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XXKamixX Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Haha, this is freaking adorable xD
Awesome idea too! This is awesome
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
LOL. THANK YOU VERY MUCH. (x

:iconbigheartplz:
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XXKamixX Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Student Digital Artist
you're welcome ;D
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threehoursbackx Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
@#&#@ i was like spazzing reading all of this!!!

as soon as i read

"Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry.
Again and Again,"

i was like OMO NO WAY.

"Let's end this Secret Game."

....

how come i can imagine yunho saying that to me.....

:giggle:

as you already know

I LOVEEEEEEEE THIS :heart::heart:!!!!
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2009
LOLL. XD

Yunho: "Let's end this Secret Game."
*makes a die-for smirk*

YAYY. : D
AS YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU TOO.

:iconbigheartplz:
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threehoursbackx Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
@#@*&@(* LOL WHEN I READ "*makes a die-for smirk*" I STARTED SPAZZING LIKE CRAZYYY @____@;;;

^____^ :heart::heart:
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
LOLL. NOOOO~
THE EMOTICON WITH THE HEARTS & TONGUE. HAHAHA. :heart:

I should find a picture with Yunho doing a sexy smirk. (x

Hehee...I found this instead though:
[link]
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threehoursbackx Featured By Owner May 1, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
LOL I KNOW YOU LOVE THAT ONE. ^___^

!#)*@& even though i already saw that picture
i still went @#(&@)#*&@)*& over it LOL
<333333
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
NO I DON'T. LOL. ;__;

Daddy should do something like that... |:
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threehoursbackx Featured By Owner May 3, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
T____T WHYYYYY~~

one like what? with a gun? O.O
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner May 3, 2009
Sarcasm. (x

LOL. SURE. TO KILL YOU. <3
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