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T-t-t-t-tell me,
That you are,
Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry.
Again and Again,
You throw my Love In The Ice.
It is Unforgettable.
Love After Love,
You develop a Dangerous Mind.
All I want you to do is to
Free Your Mind.
Because Your Love Is All I Need.

Tonight I want to be with U.
So Show Me Your Love.
This will become an Endless Moment.

Well...Let's Go On A Trip!
To watch the Rising, Red Sun.
And the beautiful Purple Line.
This feels like Paradise,
Hi Ya Ya~
What a Lovely Day.

You know your Hug gives me warmth,
To let me survive like a Survivor.
I want to Talk to you, Play with you, and Love you.
And let you steal my Heart, Mind, & Soul.

I am Proud of our love.
Lovin' You is part of my Happiness.
It feels like a Summer Dream.
So to fulfill my Wish,
Let's end this Secret Game.

- © cherliar ♥
This is for "Poem In The Pocket Day" tomorrow. (:
I took one out from the internet and I didn't like it...
I mean I liked it, but I wanted to be original.
I saw that my friends wrote their own poems, so I wanted to do the same. ^^

Anyways...I decided to use song names to make my poem. XD
Hopefully, the school staff & students wouldn't be like, "HUH? WTH IS THIS?"

*sigh*
Comments/Opinions are appreciated. ;D
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Melloloveschocolate Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Student General Artist
The question here is, "Why isn't there 1,033 favorites for this?!!!" :O

:love::+fav:
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SaranghaeUnni Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
Yay <3 lol loved the beginning ;)
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
thanks. ^__^ <3
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fr-esh Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Student
you. are. a. legend.
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
LOL ! thanks...? ;D
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runswithmonkies Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
so cute. :D

KPOP FTW. ;D
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
Aw thanks. <3
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BlackRose1377 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
Hahaha.
I liked it.
I loved the fact that you used song names for it.
I never would have thought of thath.
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iHeartSuJu13 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
Thanks! :aww: <33333
I'm glad you liked it.
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BlackRose1377 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
XD ;P
You're welcome.
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